Please review my site

**jimmysyf** · 06-25-2008, 02:15 PM

Hi y'all,

Please review my site and tell me what do you think. it is not 100% complete yet and i know that some of the links are not working because these pages are still under construction. But take a look and let me know please

. Since i can't post in the thread yet and i don't know why it doesn't appear in the signature, here is plan C, it is pharaohinvestment dot com

Thanks!!

**philippine_real_estate** · 06-26-2008, 03:23 AM

hhmmm, i think the design is a bit old, it'll be better if you apply CMS like wordpress on it. Another thing I noticed is the Title tag and description, if you could change it on the way that its not all keywords or something like that.

So far that's it, please don't get mad, I'm just trying to help

**jimmysyf** · 06-26-2008, 02:57 PM

Originally Posted by philippine_real_estate

hhmmm, i think the design is a bit old, it'll be better if you apply CMS like wordpress on it. Another thing I noticed is the Title tag and description, if you could change it on the way that its not all keywords or something like that.

So far that's it, please don't get mad, I'm just trying to help

Oh no!! not mad at all, i really appreciate all the comments to get my website in the best shape. BTW what is CMS?

**philippine_real_estate** · 06-27-2008, 01:59 AM

Originally Posted by jimmysyf

Oh no!! not mad at all, i really appreciate all the comments to get my website in the best shape. BTW what is CMS?

CMS is Content Management System. A good example is Wordpress. If you can redesign your site and use CMS, you can easily put contents on your site. Another thing is you need to optimize your site based on your targeted keywords.

**wchua24** · 06-27-2008, 10:59 AM

upon reviewing your site... i think you can add a bit of life in to it...that content is good alright but you should make a good presentation to it...to how you will deliver the message to the viewer of the site..your logo and the letterings im sure you can do more..

**jimmysyf** · 07-05-2008, 08:00 PM

Originally Posted by wchua24

upon reviewing your site... i think you can add a bit of life in to it...that content is good alright but you should make a good presentation to it...to how you will deliver the message to the viewer of the site..your logo and the letterings im sure you can do more..

Thank you all for your reply, I am actually remodeling my website based on your comments. Also, I am modifying the keywords, i am using google analytics which is really awesome, it shows the keywords used which gave me better ideas of what i can include on my website

**jvcus17** · 07-08-2008, 04:30 AM

hi dont accept this negatively however you should take this as an inspiration. Your site is like my project in college and I know you can do better than this..

**jimmysyf** · 07-08-2008, 02:57 PM

Originally Posted by jvcus17

hi dont accept this negatively however you should take this as an inspiration. Your site is like my project in college and I know you can do better than this..

How better? As design or content?