Tear Me Apart

[Copywriter]

I've fiddled around with my personal website for the past year or so and I'd be interested in honest opinions. The site is:
www.SterlingDescriptions.com (http://www.sterlingdescriptions.com)

I'm curious what your initial reaction would be if you came across this site, and if you would instantly hit the back button on your browser or if you would want to read more.

Does anything there strike you as interesting, and is this a service you would ever consider using?

What should I get rid of, and what should I add?

Be honest, be cruel, and just tear it apart!

Thanks in advance for your help...

[EricRichardson]

My inital reaction is that the site is very vanilla. I think it looks good but there's nothing that really engages me as a REALTOR or as a general visitor.

I tend to think that I am the typical web browser in that if there is nothing but text, I tend to scan and not really read.

[Copywriter]

That's an excellent suggestion, and I thank you.

I had feared that, although my wife liked the overall design and said it was "modern," the site still managed to be rather bland and might not hold a visitor's attention.

[stock_post]

Hi your site looks good.

Just add more content. As of now it appeals good on the first pass.

You just need to make sure to cash in on the first impression and make sure the realtor would stay on the site.

Thanks

[spanishproperty]

Looks like an open source template to me, I think that you need to personalise the site abit more, you need alot more info for the clients, and maybe spice it up with some tools to use, images and something abit more flashy on there.

The thing with open source templates is that you need to stamp your own style with them.