please review ibuyland.com

[ibuyhomes]

I would appreciate any constructive criticism of www.ibuyland.com

thanks in advance

[Chief Tutor]

I looked at your website and what I see is an online business card.

If you want it to be an online brochure, I would go into more detail about the following:

Summarize some successful transactions
Have some testamonials from sellers
Break-up the home page to target your potential consumer. Right now it is just short Paragraphs. You need catch lines to get people to read more
In my opinion, which that and $3.50 will get you a cup of coffee, the site is currently no more than a contact form. You have to make the user feel more comfortable or I don't think that a qualifed customer will take you seriously.

Just my two cents.....(BTW.....I beleive you can get some serious responses, but you just need to improve the overall look, feel and content of the website.

[Ripliancum]

That's great, even my grandma could read those tabs!

[Andrew Wright]

My only knock would be that there is huge gap in the middle of the page and the words at the bottom are too small and too light in color.

[Cedar City Utah Realtor]

LOL Check out the keyword stuffing! Scroll to the bottam of the page you will see what i mean.